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Miss Schappel Had A Problem by ~LadyLieDie:iconLadyLieDie:



Miss Schappel had some problems
Those problems ran amuck
One day she told her classmates
That they were all sick

Funny how these kids are
They laugh at all the tapes
They'll laugh at about just anything
Like suicide or

Raking leaves on the lawn
Miss Schappel slipped and fell
When her mother asker if she was hurt
She told her to go to

Help me, I am drowning
Miss SChappel just can't hear
And if I die by her hands
I think I will shed a

Tyranny is the rage
And lies will bring you fame
Miss Schappel was tired of humans
And she went freaking

Inside her head was spinning
She used their skin as coats
She began to eat their insides
And slit all of their

Thoroughly, she killed them
Her classmates began to shriek
She cut off all their arms
And cut off all their

Featuring the doctor
For he was in this play
Miss Schappel became mad
And told him that he was

Say, how was that meeting?
Putting away is a must
Miss SChappel was sent off
For problems, like lack of

Trust me, I'm a doctor
And I will make you sane
He thrust the needle in her arm
All she could feel was

Paying for the price
She didn't have anything left
She tied a rope around her neck
And Miss Schappel prayed for
DEATH
DEATH
DEATH
©2009-2010 ~LadyLieDie
:iconladyliedie:

Author's Comments

It's one of those songs were they're singing and you think you know the next rhyme, only it ends up as something else. I wrote this song after I heard "Miss Lucy Had Some Leeches" by Emilie Autumn.

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I thought I'd make one of those songs dedicated to ~TripleS.
Yeah, the ending seemed kinda harsh, but it sounds sorta nice.

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SORTA NICE LOL.

I'M GLAD I'M IN YOUR THOUGHTS THOUGH. *shot*
:iconladyliedie:
:iconconstipationplz:

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"Give an artist a camera,they make art. Give an emo a camera,they make MySpace pictures."- Diana Ly

"Hypocrisy is the universal language." - Diana Ly
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The meter seems inconsistent, but it's a nice effort overall. I hadn't heard of the Emilie Autumn version before.

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:iconladyliedie:
Yeah, I know. I suck at doing anything musical.

Yeah, the Emilie Autumn one is the one you should be looking at. It has that,"Oh, a nursery rhyme to play those hand games to! How sweet! Wait, what'd she say?" kinda thing going on.

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"Give an artist a camera,they make art. Give an emo a camera,they make MySpace pictures."- Diana Ly

"Hypocrisy is the universal language." - Diana Ly
:iconsmilefortyeight:
It's not so much musical--just the number of beats per line. 7, 6, 7, 6 (approximately). Did you try reading it out loud as you were writing it?

A slightly more mature take on the "Miss Helen Had A Steamboat" rhyme, yeah. (I always thought the kid versions were relatively vicious in the first place, though.)

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Yeah, I read it out loud, but I didn't know how to fix it. D= I figured that took musical talent.

Children rhymes were always weird. I've always felt suspicious about them ever since I found out that "Ring aound the Rosy" was about a disease.

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"Give an artist a camera,they make art. Give an emo a camera,they make MySpace pictures."- Diana Ly

"Hypocrisy is the universal language." - Diana Ly
:iconsmilefortyeight:
Hrm. "Raking leaves on the lawn" would fit the scheme better if it was "raking leaves out on the lawn." "When mommy asked if she got hurt." You need to slur the "a" in "about" on the seventh line... Nope. It's all math. Counting beats. Well, counting beats and arranging it so every four lines ends on a suggestive note... (On which: you've heard the Assumption Song?)

Nine Jack Nine, rope made of twine, hung him until he was...

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I don't like to associate math too much unless I have to. It's kinda like food on a plate. I don't want them to touch.

Oh, the Assumption Song is a delight. I want to try singing that in class and see how much trouble I get into.

=O

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"Give an artist a camera,they make art. Give an emo a camera,they make MySpace pictures."- Diana Ly

"Hypocrisy is the universal language." - Diana Ly
:iconsmilefortyeight:
*mashes food together*

XD I wouldn't advise that. You're technically in the clear 'til the end of the song, but I doubt you'd be allowed to get that far anyway.

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